Friday, 13 March 2015


this is a parody of the book wonder. It's about a kid called August who has a weird face.

I wake up to the sound of silence. Nothing , no one says a word. I Feel like something is wrong. Everyone is usually awake. I Got out of bed to look around, creek goes the wooden floor, still silence. I opened the door , creek goes the door. I put on my bunny slippers. It's really early but it was my birthday. I didn't want to wake anyone up or else I will be in big trouble. Still silence. I walked down the hall trying to be as quite as I can. Daisy my doggy was laying right in the middle of the hallway.

There is just a taste of my story. My strategy is idea's I used feelings and sounds in the text e.g creek and silence.

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