a couple weeks ago i preformed in the school production i was in the main cast as a extra lady so i sang most of the songs so the back story is that Maurice Mc seventy wasn't invited to lady Evelyn
(her cousins) wedding when people that she hardly new came he very angry so he made an evil cruse voucher and give it to her as her wedding present that would curse the Oaklands kingdom FOREVER But as all evil every curse MUST have a loophole (so the good guys can win in the end) so he kidnapped sir Andrew Andersen the principle of Oaklands so then nothing can stand in his way but it wasn't that easy with guards with minds sharp as a baby's bottom Evelyn had a plan to rescue him
in guitar i am learning how to read notes its very difficult but I'm getting a bit better at it i leaned a new song all locked up for the production i had to learn 2 new chored G6 and D7 so it was different from learning notes but it still is fun
in keyboard i got to page 57 in my book witch is huge i might finish the book by the end
of this year it's getting very hard now because the notes are half a line a part so i have messed up a lot of times this term
in choir we have learned these song : bubbly, bad day and money money money its easy to sing high after the production
peer mediation i have helped 3 people over a couple weeks but it looks like people argrying has stopped
other actives i have done but these are the main 1s at the moment
a app with minecraft food diys and craft's video's
Why r u making this :
so people who struggle with minecraft can learn more
people that like food but want more can learn how to cook different foods
and people who want to learn how to making different crafts can watch these vids to learn MORE
What have u achieved today :
we made a bit of our app
I was playing on my laptop when my mom's phone went off. I yelled "Mom your phone is going off!" She ran down the stairs and answers the phone. While she was on the phone I was just playing on my laptop, she stops me; "Sorry Goldilocks, but something has came up at work so I have to go but you can not stay home alone so you can go and sell some COOKIES!"
that was my story of Goldilocks perspective of Goldilocks and the 3 bears.
i use punctuation e.g ";.,
i think im at solo level relational
In writing we have been learning how to punctuation effectively in our writing.
This a paragraph from my writing.
Lately there has been people that are divided over who has a bigger responserbilety consumers or buisness?
Somepeople say consumers because they buy the goods, while others say buisness because they sell the goods.
I think i'm at relational because I know when to punctuatoin in my writing but I don't use harder ones eg semecoloms. I have used coloums but thats for my reasons and objections eg reason 1:
For writing we have been writing narratives.
here's a sample
It was the morning before my first day ever at and in high school, I was running around the house to get everything ready for the next day. I was so excited the day flow by, I was running to the space were my very last was. I didn't know where it is, I ran around the house to find it. It was missing?
That was my first few lines. I'm so sorry to leave you on a cliff hanger but I didn't want to give too much away.
my goal was to use punctuation, I did this by using ?,.
In class we have been writing on making choices here is my first paragraph.
you may notice in my writing I have used the word also and for example.
The law is like rules to a game, if you don't follow them, your not going to have a good time.If you don't follow them you could get a fine,be arested or worst. For example if you got a fine for driving and don't pay it you could get a bigger fine or loss your licent.If you stell you could get a fine or be banned from that shop.
For the last few weeks I have been learning a reading strategy called making inferences.Today I am going to give you 2 examples to teach you how to use this strategy.
This is a tip use clues. Clues stand for
Character motive Left out information Understand the characters point of view Empathise with the author Symbolism
example 1 :The Fisherman
Although I can see him still—
The freckled man who goes
To a gray place on a hill
In gray Connemara clothes
At dawn to cast his flies—
It's long since I began
To call up to the eyes
This wise and simple man.
All day I'd looked in the face
What I had hoped it would be
To write for my own race
And the reality:
The living men that I hate,
The dead man that I loved,
The craven man in his seat,
The insolent unreproved—
And no knave brought to book
Who has won a drunken cheer—
The witty man and his joke
Aimed at the commonest ear,
The clever man who cries
The catch cries of the clown,
The beating down of the wise
And great Art beaten down.
Maybe a twelve-month since
Suddenly I began,
In scorn of this audience,
Imagining a man,
And his sun-freckled face
And gray Connemara cloth,
Climbing up to a place
Where stone is dark with froth,
And the down turn of his wrist
When the flies drop in the stream—
A man who does not exist,
A man who is but a dream;
And cried, “Before I am old
I shall have written him one
Poem maybe as cold
And passionate as the dawn.”
Try use the reading strategy on this poem.
example 2 : YOU NEVER GET TRUE REPEAT
After enjoying the supreme bliss
No need to have a replay swish
This need of once more aesthete
Literally you never get true repeat
Those unique feelings in deep secret
Of silent eyes of faithful evening sedate
No curtain falling will have same rehearse
Of those fading moments like dead verse
Those flashing visions can never be recited
And never be accomplished in succession
Just enjoy imagination and never get deceived
Listen unfathomable notes from innate ocean
Tune your mind for afresh heavenly pleasure
Like the Earth ready for daily bakes and bear
Try using the reading strategy here
From the first poem I have used the strategy to infer
The author thinks the fisherman is intresting
2. The author thinks the fisherman is clever
From the second poem I have used the reading strategy to infer
1. the author thinks about stuff that people love and like
Jesse's argument- Why new zealand shouldn't change its flag.
John key is our prime minister but when he want's to change our flag, People are going to take a stand.Now im going to give you resons why I think we shouldn't change our flag.If this goes ahead what will we change it to & why.Secound it costs a lot of money when it could go to places like christchurch to repair the city & to help out because stuff like floods could happen! If we do change the flag we will have to change our suveners like the kiwi with the flag! that was my first body paragraph in my argument. This paragraph show some persuasive words / sentences. For example I used. If this goes ahead