Thursday, 3 July 2014

writing

In writing we have been learning how to punctuation effectively in our writing.

This a paragraph from my writing.

Lately there has been people that are divided over who has a bigger responserbilety consumers or buisness?
Somepeople say consumers because they buy the goods, while others say buisness because they sell the goods.

I think i'm at relational because I know when to punctuatoin in my writing but I don't use harder ones eg semecoloms. I have used coloums but thats for my reasons and objections eg reason 1:

Wednesday, 18 June 2014

consumer garentees Act



this video shows the consumer garentees act

consumer - molly
friend, pizza man, ( cause their was no boys ) and camera girl - jesse
shop owner - jasmine
shop secound owner - abi

Wednesday, 4 June 2014

maths

http://www.showme.com/sh/?h=vX733dA

this link will take you to my video on the show me site

SORRY the answer was 5/2

Friday, 30 May 2014

Art Atack

https://drive.google.com/a/oaklands.school.nz/file/d/0BwX8Nht8Rwbfa0poaTV3REN3bVFJRS1YWTA5ajhlYzNIbEJN/edit?usp=sharing

This is my art and I'm going to reflect on how I think I went

WALT;
i can apply the drawing and painting techniques.

Solo level;
i think I am at extended abstract because I can seek feedback from others.

Strategies;
i did/used a horizon line, eye line, contrast, vanishing point and simple shapes.

Thursday, 17 April 2014

end of term reflection

Its the end of term one and i'm going to reflect on how my learning has been.

The area of my learning that I have made the most progress on is my maths because I didn't know what anything about the topic so I didn't know the answers.

The area I want to improve on next term is my writing because I'm on the right track but I need to get better because I need to get a higher standed on writing.

Friday, 11 April 2014

writing

For writing we have been writing narratives.
here's a sample

It was the morning before my first day ever at and in high school, I was running around the house to get everything ready for the next day. I was so excited the day flow by, I was running to the space were my very last was. I didn't know where it is, I ran around the house to find it. It was missing?

That was my first few lines. I'm so sorry to leave you on a cliff hanger but I didn't want to give too much away.

my goal was to use punctuation, I did this by using ?,.

making choices



This video shows how making choices is hard and it's ok to get things wrong.

The influences in this video are jenna's friend annabeth and the cool kids stacey and brittany.


Friday, 4 April 2014

writing

In class we have been writing on making choices here is my first paragraph.

you may notice in my writing I have used the word also and for example.

making choices

The law is like rules to a game, if you don't follow them, your not going to have a good time.If you don't follow them you could get a fine,be arested or worst. For example if you got a fine for driving and don't pay it you could get a bigger fine or loss your licent.If you stell you could get a fine or be banned from that shop.