jesse's ten guitars

Jesse's argument- Why new zealand shouldn't change its flag. 

John key is our prime minister but when he want's to change our flag, People are going to take a stand.Now im going to give you resons why I think we shouldn't change our flag.If this goes ahead what will we change it to & why.Secound it costs a lot of money when it could go to places like christchurch to repair the city & to help out because stuff like floods could happen! If we do change the flag we will have to change our suveners like the kiwi with the flag!

that was my first body paragraph in my argument. This paragraph show some persuasive words / sentences. For example I used. If this goes ahead
 

Jesse's crazy ArtAtack!

Lines - the blue lake - for effectiveness I would rate it an 8/10 because most of it is dark/bold but some of It is painted over

Colours - the grass,mountains and the sky - for effectiveness I would rate it an 9/10 because it's not the right colour of the sky and sun

Tone - the grass,mountains,sky and sun - for effectiveness I would rate it an excellent 10/10 because it's all the different shads of green the only thing that's not green is the lake

Shape - the lake,sky,grass,mountains and sun - for effectiveness I would rate it an excellent 10/10 because it's all very simple and basic

Overall - I would vote the best thing out of the four choices is Tone because it's all green so I think I did the best painting I could do =)